Cats In The Clans

[Silverstar Of CITC]

Good things

1) Staff positions still open
2) No activation code
3) Fair rules
4) Friendly staff
5) Admin takes checks on site
6) Most are active
7) New Pictures and skins[/center]

Plot

New leaf has return and now it is starting to get warmer. Prey is returning to the forest, but with more prey means more predators. The clans are still at peace and most are relaxing. Each clan is not having many problems. Now there are more kits to become fine warriors. The gain of warriors are great. Most can defend themselves. Trouble will still linger around the territories. The Wolves are peaceful, pups are now warriors and each pack is riasing. All the other animals are getting peaceful and happy. Now it is time to have peace for moons to come. Forbidden love lingers in the minds of many. A new discovery has been found, Pineclan.

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[Bear]

It's not new leaf, idiot. It's newleaf. And don't capitalize wolves when it's not the beginning of a sentence. Also, it's "Newleaf has returned" not "New leaf has return", stupid. Clans are always supposed to be capitalized, too, so it's not "clan". That bugs me, and "Now there are more kits to become fine warriors" makes no sense. Change it to "Now there are more kits becoming fine warriors." You spelled rising wrong, too; it's PineClan, not Pineclan, and please make your sentences longer!